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Outlaws. Part I

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     “Faster, faster!” the boy blurted as he ran barefoot downhill, vaulting over rocks and fallen branches upon the leaf-coated slope. A brown bear was chasing after him. “Faster, man!”

But the man at his side was panting heavily. He was ten steps behind the boy, his knee-high boots barely dodging the obstacles in their path, weary under the weight of the sack he was carrying on one shoulder.

     “Drop it, man, let it go,” the boy prompted, his black brow frowning.

But the man's grip tightened upon the mouth of the sack instead, and his head shook in dismissal. At the foot of the hill he stopped, crouching with his hands propped against his knees to draw breath. He breathed in and out a few times, ran a hand over his long thick moustache in a nervous overwrought gesture and, then, as if reaching a conclusion, he rushed to open his sack. He took out a fine flintlock musket of Austrian making, leaving the bag open beside him to reveal perhaps a dozen other firearms, pistols and a couple of muskets.

The bear stopped beside the two humans, not aggressive but rather curious. The barefooted boy patted the beast's head absently, his gaze drifting to the runaway man at his side, then uphill to espy the group of men they were running from, and around them to find another possible escape route.

The runaway man took stance behind a leaf-covered mound with musket in hand, two pistols shining in the high girdle around his waist and the handle of a Turkish hanger1 sword, fashioned in antler and with brass cross-guard and pummel and tucked in a leather scabbard, visible amid the fur-trimmed margins of his coat. Not prying his gaze from the spine of the musket held before his green eyes, the man grunted shortly:

     “Run.” But then, he added: “Wait. The sack. Take it with you. On the banks of the river Jiu, down towards Caracal, there is a camp...”

The boy scoffed:

“How can you trust I'll take it there? Why would I even carry it such a long way? All those firearms, I could sell them anywhere.”

     “Then sell them,” the man swallowed. “Sell them to the honest people, but don't let them fall in the hands of the potera2, or the Ottomans and the Phanariots, nor the Russians or the Habsburgs. Sell them to our people, the Romanian peasants. Or else it was all in vain. Now go, boy. Run!”

But the boy made no move. His keen black eyes peered hawkishly somewhere in the distance, towards the clearing where his bear had rushed. Then he lay his hand upon the spine of the man's flintlock:

     “No. Come with me.” At the runaway's confused frown, he forced his gun blandly downward and uttered: “Trust me.”
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1A short recurvated sword with single-edge blade used in the 17th and 18th centuries.

2Group of armed men hired by princes (called domnitori) or boyars in 18th century Romania (Wallachia), either court servants or mercenaries, to catch wrongdoers and bring them to justice.

~ Outlaws. Part I ~


The first part from my new short-story entitled Outlaws, set in late 18th century Romania!


The story:


Outlaws. Part I -> you are here
Outlaws. Part II
Outlaws Part III 
Outlaws. Part IV 
Outlaws. Part V
Outlaws. Part VI
Outlaws. Part VII

Historical background: 18th century Romania is called Wallachia (Țara Românească) and comprises a small part of what it is now (the Southern region), disputed among the Habsurg, Ottoman and Russian empires. It is a period of numerous conflicts. Gypsies are slaves at this time.

The protagonists of the story (MurguNarcisa and Amza) and the cover:
The Bear-tamer by HelevornArt  Daffodil by HelevornArt  Amza Haiducul by HelevornArt  Outlaws by HelevornArt
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The plan was to post longer parts of the story preceded by 2-3 illustrations each, but I decided to post 1 illustration + its (shorter) corresponding episode on consecutive days, twice a week; hope that works for anyone who's interesting in following it!
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A wonderful piece of engaging reading, and a great start to what sounds like a very interesting historical fiction.  Punchy and fast paced, this intro really draws the reader in to find out what's going to happen next, and the twist with the bear not in fact chasing the pair was great.  Be sure to check out the work of your fellow featured writers too in our Monthly Round-Up!
Keep up the great work!

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